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jail time should be replaced by social services are not for minor crimes.

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Points to remember before you participate in  Essay Writing:

  • Divide your essay into 3 parts (each in a different paragraph).
    • Introduction  -> content  -> conclusion.
  • Give a space after the full stop (.)  and comma (,).
  •  Capitalise the next word after the full stop.
  • Frame small sentences as it will prevent you from making mistakes. Avoid extra spaces.
  • Your essay should not be less than 300 and not more than 400 words
  • The essay should be the original work and it should not be copied from anywhere.

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Total Spelling Mistake: 1

" I am of the notion that , time is very important aspect in our day-to-day life . Someone who is continually busy in there work will not disturb the society . It is scientifically proven that , "Everybody deserves second chance ." Every person do mistakes at one point or another . If the got punishment such like that they can't try to change there self. The social work will help the criminals to start new life , where they can utilize there time . "Social work is the way for best utilization of free time. From last few years there has been growing interest in social work . Social work is effective method for criminals who are in jail . "There are two sides to every coin." Means you can't have good part of something without it's bad. However if we compare the merits versus demerits, it will be safe to conclude that replacement of jail time by social work having lots of advantages. "All things considered, it seems reasonable to assume that jail time should be replaced by social work for minor criminals." "A man without work is like a bird without wings." One of the biggest advantage of social work is , " criminal who are doing social work/any work will remain healthy & fit physically as well as mentally . To sum up everything, I would say " it's a best opportunity for criminals to converting there jail time by social work."  "



Total Words Count: 235

Total Time: 10 Min

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This tool didn't check matters or Grammatical error written in your answer (essay). Its verify only (1) The spelling mistake (2) Numbers of words (i.e. >50 & <170) and (3) Total time is taken by you to give the answer. Your answer evaluation happens on the basis of all these points and the overall score gets generated out of 10.
It's for your practice before your essay writing exam , whether you are able to write the essay by using phrase/outline in given span of time or not.

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Total Spelling Mistake: 10

" Every crime should have a punishment and every criminal should get punished under law. Punishment which is under law makes the people realise the what he or she done was wrong,unethical . Punishment will make people follow the rules which are specified under law.  Giving punishment for every crime may not be good decision. Instead of giving punishments like prision for entire life, jail there is another option will build behaviour of the criminals. Giving punishments like cleaning environment,  helping others, serving others may help them to know about social behaviour and they also know how to behave with other people. All alone help them to live happly after releasing from prision. A survey says that those are prisioned are social then those who got punished like helping others. Every crime has certain level of punishment, but below a certain level of crime government should avoide punishment like prision and implement new punishments like social, ethical punishments which help other people . No one wants to make crime and go to jail many of them do crime due to situation. Those who affect more then one person should be punished as per government laws. By giving punishments like there would be less stress on police and police stations. Different people have different thought processes we should not think that everyone will change by these punishments . Before giving punishments judge should understand what kind of person he is dealing with and judge as per the criminal . Most of the people become more cruial after going to jail and become more dangerous by learning new techniques from new people and by increasing his friends in jail. So, few will become good after coming from by giving punishments that will  imporve social behaviour of the criminals . "



Total Words Count: 289

Total Time: 10 Min

Note:

This tool didn't check matters or Grammatical error written in your answer (essay). Its verify only (1) The spelling mistake (2) Numbers of words (i.e. >50 & <170) and (3) Total time is taken by you to give the answer. Your answer evaluation happens on the basis of all these points and the overall score gets generated out of 10.
It's for your practice before your essay writing exam , whether you are able to write the essay by using phrase/outline in given span of time or not.

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Total Spelling Mistake: 1

" I am of the notion that , time is very important aspect in our day-to-day life . Someone who is continually busy in there work will not disturb the society . It is scientifically proven that , "Everybody deserves second chance ." Every person do mistakes at one point or another . If the got punishment such like that they can't try to change there self. The social work will help the criminals to start new life , where they can utilize there time . "Social work is the way for best utilization of free time. From last few years there has been growing interest in social work . Social work is effective method for criminals who are in jail . "There are two sides to every coin." Means you can't have good part of something without it's bad. However if we compare the merits versus demerits, it will be safe to conclude that replacement of jail time by social work having lots of advantages. "All things considered, it seems reasonable to assume that jail time should be replaced by social work for minor criminals." "A man without work is like a bird without wings." One of the biggest advantage of social work is , " criminal who are doing social work/any work will remain healthy & fit physically as well as mentally . To sum up everything, I would say " it's a best opportunity for criminals to converting there jail time by social work." "



Total Words Count: 235

Total Time: 10 Min

Note:

This tool didn't check matters or Grammatical error written in your answer (essay). Its verify only (1) The spelling mistake (2) Numbers of words (i.e. >50 & <170) and (3) Total time is taken by you to give the answer. Your answer evaluation happens on the basis of all these points and the overall score gets generated out of 10.
It's for your practice before your essay writing exam , whether you are able to write the essay by using phrase/outline in given span of time or not.